I liked the computer comments they were brill I especially liked it was dassing rellay liked them it was so good I nearly cried I hope you win. From eleanor xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The idias was so fabuless I cant beleve it I wold not thimk of a trampaleen did you think of a Ice scating ring I hope you win the 10000 pounds love Ellis batesxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
i wish on the playground you could put a play ship or plane or a castle with the ramps and stairs drawbridges and different levels and doors and things.
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i like the work becuse the colours are blue and purple in stripes and the pouings are good coluful and nice to read.
I liked the computer comments they were brill I especially liked it was dassing rellay liked them it was so good I
nearly cried I hope you win.
From eleanor xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The idias was so fabuless I cant beleve it I wold not thimk of a trampaleen did you think of a Ice scating ring I hope you win the 10000 pounds love Ellis batesxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The idea is so bilent bacuse that is just what I whontid. The colur is so snase.I like the colours thay are blue and purple.
i wish on the playground you could put a play ship or plane or a castle with the ramps and stairs drawbridges and different levels and doors and things.
the poem is good colful and nice and it is good .well done year 1.
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